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據(jù)報(bào)道，中學(xué)生的身體素質(zhì)有所下降。這一情況已經(jīng)引起全社會(huì)的關(guān)注和教育部門的高度重視。下圖是某中學(xué)關(guān)于青少年體育鍛煉的宣傳標(biāo)語。
請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)和要求，用英語寫一篇短文，80詞左右。
要點(diǎn)：1.鍛煉身體的好處：strong，healthy，energetic，
2.鍛煉身體的方式：ballgames，running，swimming，．．．
3.請(qǐng)你談?wù)剬?duì)學(xué)校開展體育鍛煉的看法或建議。(至少寫兩點(diǎn))
要求：1.內(nèi)容必須包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2.開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3.語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整。
4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名及姓名。
EXERCISE ONE HOLR A DAY，KEEP ILLNESS AWAY!

Answer 1

Health is very important to us teenagers.Either study or work is based on strong body. Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy and energetic. If we don't take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily. Just as the slogan says, "Exercise one hour a day, keep illness away. "
There are many kinds of sports we can do, such as running, swimming and ball games.
Now we students have to do too much homework after school. I hope teachers will leave us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports.  I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us.

解析試題分析：本文的寫作，首先將題目審清�？梢詮腻憻捝眢w的重要性著手，說明鍛煉身體的好處能夠幫助我們更健康，學(xué)習(xí)生活更富活力；其次，介紹幾種鍛煉的方式，如跑步、游泳等；最后，對(duì)學(xué)校的體育鍛煉提出看法或建議，可以說少布置作業(yè)，多安排體育賽事等方面進(jìn)行寫作。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類寫作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：初中英語的作文，著重考察學(xué)生連詞成句的能力，要在“準(zhǔn)”字上下功夫。在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動(dòng)詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)等諸多方面。對(duì)于中考的作文，盡量將所學(xué)的知識(shí)運(yùn)用到作文中，寫出富于變化、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊的文章，不要出現(xiàn)中式英文。在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對(duì)于寫的好的句子進(jìn)行默寫，考試時(shí)就能寫出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文。