Question

假如在英語(yǔ)課上，老師請(qǐng)你們就“Lucky Money(壓歲錢(qián))”這個(gè)話題分組進(jìn)行討論，但你認(rèn)為同學(xué)們對(duì)“Hobbies（愛(ài)好）”更感興趣，建議老師更換話題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示和要求，寫(xiě)一份發(fā)言稿，談一談你的理由。

提示：(1) Why do you like talking about hobbies?

(2) What’s your reason for not talking about lucky money?

要求：（1）發(fā)言稿須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

（2）發(fā)言稿中不得涉及真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

（3）詞數(shù)：60~80。

參考詞匯: one’s own hobby, a proper topic(合適的話題), personal, unhappy

I think talking about hobbies is better than talking about lucky money. It is     

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version

I think talking about hobbies is better than talking about lucky money. It is easy and interesting. Everyone has his own hobby, like playing ball games, listening to music, drawing and so on. It can bring us pleasure and make us relaxed. We have a lot to say when we talk about it.

Lucky money, however, isn’t a proper topic for us, because it’s too personal. What’s more, not all of us can get lucky money. Some may feel unhappy if we talk about it.

So talking about hobbies is really a good choice.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，題目中給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先要閱讀材料，讀懂提示中涉及的問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中注意將自己的觀點(diǎn)和理由介紹清楚。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文涉及過(guò)去現(xiàn)在和將來(lái)三種時(shí)態(tài)的表達(dá)，注意時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致等問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中注意在表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，注意使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。