Question

假如你是李亮,你的筆友韓強(qiáng)來(lái)信要參觀你的家鄉(xiāng),請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示,給他寫(xiě)一封80詞左右的回信。開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
提示：1. 你的家鄉(xiāng)在山東東南部；
2. 春天是來(lái)這兒的最佳時(shí)機(jī)；
3. 白天天氣溫暖、干燥、多風(fēng)；夜間有點(diǎn)涼；
4. 其中最有趣的事情是在田野里放風(fēng)箏；
5. 你的期望和祝愿。
Dear Han Qiang,
I’m glad to hear that you will come to my hometown. _________________________
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Yours,
Li Liang

Answer 1

Dear Han Qiang,
I’m glad to hear that you will come to my hometown.Let me tell you something about it.It’s a small town in the southeast of Shandong.The best time to visit here is in spring.The weather is warm,dry and windy.But sometimes it’s a bit cold at night,so remember to bring some warm clothes.One of the most interesting things is to fly kites in the field.
I wish you visit my hometown soon.I’   m sure you’ll have a good time here.
Yours,
Li Liang

試題分析：試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中要注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如:I’m glad to hear that聽(tīng)說(shuō)……我很高興，in the southeast of Shandong在山東的東南部，The best time to做……的最佳時(shí)間，a bit cold at night晚上有點(diǎn)冷，One of the most interesting things最有趣的事情之一，fly kites in the field在田野里放風(fēng)箏，have a good time玩得開(kāi)心等，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。