Question

隨著年齡的增長，我們所學(xué)知識(shí)的廣度在擴(kuò)大，深度在加深，作業(yè)量也會(huì)增大。你們學(xué)校的English Newsletter正在以O(shè)ur homework為題舉行征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格提示的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇征文。

	作業(yè)	影響
以 前	1.作業(yè)量少； 2.題目容易	有時(shí)間進(jìn)行自己的愛好、……
現(xiàn) 在	1. 作業(yè)量大； 2. 題目較難；	沒有充足的時(shí)間進(jìn)行自己的愛好、……
我認(rèn)為……

要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；  

       2）必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 

3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（正文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。

Our homework

     As we grow, what we learn is more and more difficult and we have more and more homework.

In the past, we                                                               

                                                                                

                                                                       

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Our homework

As we grow, what we learn is more and more difficult and we have more and more homework.

In the past, we had a little homework and it was easy. we had much time for my hobbies and we could sleep well.

However, at present we have too much homework to do. It is also very hard and takes us too much time. we don’t have enough time for our hobbies and sleep. we often feel tired in class.

In my opinion, homework is very useful for us to practice what we are learning. I will plan my time more carefully so that I can finish my homework on time and have enough time to sleep. At the same time, I can have some time for one of my hobbies one day.

【解析】

試題分析： 考查提綱類書面表達(dá)：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來. 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文出現(xiàn)一些固定短語In the past在過去， too much很多， In my opinion在我看來， At the same time同時(shí)， so that因此，at present目前。It is also very hard and takes us too much time考查 it take sb some time to do 花費(fèi)時(shí)間做某事。In my opinion, homework is very useful for us to practice what we are learning 這句話中提到 be useful for sb to do ,做某事對(duì)某人來說是有用的，還出現(xiàn)的由what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。