Question

假如你叫張霖，暑假后就要進入高中(senior middle school)學(xué)習(xí)。由于住校(live at school)與住在家里各有利弊，你想通過e-mail征求英國筆友Bill的意見。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括住宿、飲食、交通等幾個方面。
注意：1. 字?jǐn)?shù)要控制在100詞左右。
2. 不要出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名。
3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不記入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Bill,
How is everything going? Something is troubling me very much. So I’m writing to ask for your advice.
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It’s so hard for me to make a decision. I’ll be very glad if you could give me some suggestions.
Please write back soon.
Zhang Lin

Answer 1

Dear Bill,
How is everything going? Something is troubling me very much. So I’m writing to ask for your advice.
I’m going to study in the senior middle school in September. I can live either at school or at home. But I can’t decide because both have advantages and disadvantages.
At home, I have my own room. So I can have a good sleep. However, I have to share one room with 5—6 students at school. Maybe I can’t sleep well. It’s a problem. Although I can have better food at home, I enjoy eating with my classmates. I think its great fun and I can make more friends. If I live at home, I’ll have to ride to school. It’s a waste of time and not safe.
It’s so hard for me to make a decision. I’ll be very glad if you could give me some suggestions.
Please write back soon.
Zhang Lin

解析寫這篇郵件首先要提出問題，征求英國筆友Bill的意見，是住校(live at school)還是住在家里，在住宿、飲食、交通等幾個方面進行說明，寫作時要注意時態(tài)問題，這篇文章主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，還要注意句型的運用，象范文里的，Although I can have better food at home, I enjoy eating with my classmates. 這句有讓步狀語從句If I live at home, I’ll have to ride to school.這句有條件狀語從句。