Question

最近的一項(xiàng)調(diào)查研究表明：大約有20% 的學(xué)生有不吃早餐的習(xí)慣。 請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格的內(nèi)容提示寫(xiě)一篇大約80字左右的英語(yǔ)短文，文章的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出。

原因	1. 晚上學(xué)習(xí)學(xué)到太晚，想多睡一會(huì)而不吃早餐；
2. 家長(zhǎng)太忙無(wú)法照顧孩子，直接給錢(qián)讓孩子自己解決早餐；
3. 一些男生拿錢(qián)去玩游戲，一些女生為了身材苗條而不吃早餐；
后果	1. 上課無(wú)精打采，成績(jī)下降；
2. 身體越來(lái)越差；
你的建議	？（至少寫(xiě)出一條建議并給出理由）

 

From a recent survey, we know that about twenty percent students have no habit of having breakfast. ____________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

From a recent survey, we know that about twenty percent have no habit of having breakfast. Some of the students stay up late to study. In the morning, they prefer to sleep a little more rather than spend the time eating breakfast. Some parents are too busy to take care of their children, They have no time to cook breakfast for them. So they just give them some money to buy something to eat. But some boys spend the money playing games while some of the girls give up eating breakfast to keep slim. As a result, they can’t do well at school without breakfast. Students can’t concentrate in class because they have no breakfast. They get worse results. On the other hand, it’s bad for their health.

In my opinion, student should eat breakfast so that they can keep fit and have enough energy to have classes. If they are busy with their, parents should remind them of it. And parents should buy some food at home instead of giving them money so that they can take some to school.   

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)早餐問(wèn)題的議論文，本題所給材料較為詳細(xì),動(dòng)筆前先根據(jù)材料確定時(shí)態(tài)，句式，詞匯等主要內(nèi)容。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文人稱時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題較為復(fù)雜,注意人稱與謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的一致關(guān)系,時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配。寫(xiě)作中注意使用連接詞，注意表達(dá)的多樣化，做到語(yǔ)意連貫符合邏輯。內(nèi)容應(yīng)該盡量包括文中提示的內(nèi)容，可稍加拓展。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：在寫(xiě)書(shū)面表達(dá)是首先要注意的問(wèn)題就是人稱，不能混淆人稱；其次，應(yīng)注意動(dòng)詞的英語(yǔ)，根據(jù)不同的人稱確定動(dòng)詞的形式；再次，句型應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；最后，用自己熟練掌握的句型造句。