Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（本部分1小題，15分）

根據(jù)要求完成短文寫(xiě)作，把答案寫(xiě)在答卷指定的位置上。

假如你是校長(zhǎng)李楓，看到以上三位同學(xué)的意見(jiàn)，寫(xiě)一封公開(kāi)信，說(shuō)明你對(duì)以上意見(jiàn)或建議的看法，并陳述原因或提出改進(jìn)措施。不能照抄原文，80個(gè)單詞左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。要求：1 說(shuō)明立場(chǎng)，接受或不接受。2 解釋原因或提出改進(jìn)措施。

3語(yǔ)句通順，內(nèi)容流暢。

Dear students

    Some students have written to me about our school life or rules. Now I’m writing to tell you what I think about your ideas. To Zhang Hongying, I’d like to say                                            

                                                                  　　　　　　　

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I hope everyone have a better life at school and do better in all your lessons.

                                               Yours

                                               Mr. Lee

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear students,

    Some students have written to me about our school life or rules. Now I’m writing to tell you what I think about your ideas. To Zhang Hongying, I’d like to say I agree with you. But I’ll ask some teachers to make a questionnaire first. If more than 70% students have the same ideas as yours, I’ll make the lunch time longer.

   But I’m sorry that it’s impossible for us to leave one morning every week to practice speaking English. We have time for all your subjects. You should make good study plans to improve yourself.

   And I can’t agree to have more fashionable school uniforms. Since wearing uniforms is a rule in our school, the uniforms had better be simple.

I hope everyone have a better life at school and do better in all your lessons.

Yours

Mr. Lee

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封公開(kāi)信。本題所給材料是三份意見(jiàn)信,動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀者三封信,爭(zhēng)取在公開(kāi)信中對(duì)這些問(wèn)題都有所回應(yīng)。寫(xiě)作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的賓語(yǔ)從句和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少. 如: Now I’m writing to tell you what I think about your ideas；現(xiàn)在我寫(xiě)信來(lái)告訴你們我關(guān)于你們的主義的想法。I hope everyone……，我希望每個(gè)人……。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

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