Question

假如你是李華，你的筆友Jim最近沉溺于(be crazy about…)玩電腦游戲，為此你很擔(dān)心。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示給Jim 寫(xiě)一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶�及建議。

Jim 過(guò)去	功課好，積極參加學(xué)校的各項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。
Jim 現(xiàn)在	對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)沒(méi)興趣，上課不專(zhuān)心，不按時(shí)完成作業(yè)。
你的看法	玩電腦游戲可能使你放松，但……
你的建議	(至少發(fā)揮兩點(diǎn))

要求：1. 詞數(shù)80左右。2. 要點(diǎn)完整，層次清楚，語(yǔ)法正確。(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))

Dear Jim,

I really feel worried about you.

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                                 

                                                                                

Yours

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jim,

I really feel worried about you.

You used to do well in your lessons and took an active part in the activities at school. But now you are so crazy about computer games that you have no interest in your schoolwork and don't listen to teachers as carefully as before in class. Also, you can't hand in your homework on time. Perhaps playing computer games can make you feel relaxed, but if you spend too much time on it, you will have less time to study. And it may be bad for your health. For example, it can hurt your eyes and hands.

I hope you should concentrate more on your schoolwork. Why not take part in some after-school activities when you feel bored? Why not spend more free time chatting with your friends?

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封信。給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱(chēng)時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。

考點(diǎn)：考查應(yīng)用文的寫(xiě)作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫(xiě)作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)是第一人稱(chēng)較多。寫(xiě)作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。