Question

假如你是李華，你的筆友Jim最近沉溺于(be crazy about…)玩電腦游戲，為此你很擔心。請根據(jù)下表提示給Jim 寫一封信，談談你的看法及建議。

Jim 過去	功課好，積極參加學校的各項活動。
Jim 現(xiàn)在	對學習沒興趣，上課不專心，不按時完成作業(yè)。
你的看法	玩電腦游戲可能使你放松，但……
你的建議	(至少發(fā)揮兩點)

要求：1. 詞數(shù)80左右。2. 要點完整，層次清楚，語法正確。(開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))

Dear Jim,

I really feel worried about you.

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                                 

                                                                                

Yours

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jim,

I really feel worried about you.

You used to do well in your lessons and took an active part in the activities at school. But now you are so crazy about computer games that you have no interest in your schoolwork and don't listen to teachers as carefully as before in class. Also, you can't hand in your homework on time. Perhaps playing computer games can make you feel relaxed, but if you spend too much time on it, you will have less time to study. And it may be bad for your health. For example, it can hurt your eyes and hands.

I hope you should concentrate more on your schoolwork. Why not take part in some after-school activities when you feel bored? Why not spend more free time chatting with your friends?

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析: 這是一篇應用文寫作，寫一封信。給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。寫作前先結合要表達的事情確定句子的人稱時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。

考點：考查應用文的寫作

點評：注意寫作中的時態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語言要準確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。