Question

Suppose you are a fan of “Where are we going, Dad”. Please write a letter to the programme and recommend a place for them to spend a 3-day trip.
提示：近來(lái)“爸爸去哪兒”節(jié)目轟動(dòng)了全國(guó)。如果你是這個(gè)節(jié)目的忠實(shí)粉絲，請(qǐng)給欄目組寫一封推薦信，推薦一個(gè)地方適合父親與孩子一起共同度過(guò)一個(gè)三天兩夜的旅行，并請(qǐng)至少給出兩個(gè)理由。
Phrases for reference （以下短語(yǔ)僅供參考）
be located in/on/at         famous for
share…with              have interest in
（ 注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)具體人名、校名等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）
Dear Editor,
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Yours
xxx

Answer 1

Dear Editor,
I like your program very much and I am a fan of the program, Where are we going, Dad? I want to introduce a place which is suitable for dad and child to go. It is QianDao Lake. It is located in Zhejiang Province and it is famous for its islands. There are many islands there, so we call it Qiandao Lake. The weather there is very mild, which is good for children. You can see the
beautiful scene there and enjoy the fun of catching big fish with your children. Also you can taste the delicious sea food there. I think you will have an unforgettable experience there.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們給爸爸去哪兒這個(gè)節(jié)目的編輯寫一封信，推薦一個(gè)適合爸爸和孩子去游玩的地方，并給出至少兩個(gè)理由。這是一篇開放式的作文，去哪玩，為什么，都要自己想象。首先要選定一個(gè)適合爸爸和孩子去的地方，這個(gè)地方一定要由鮮明的特色，有吸引人的地方，還要尤其吸引小孩。然后要寫出你推薦這個(gè)地方的理由。這個(gè)理由可以從那兒的氣候、特色、美食、有教育意義等方面考慮。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第一人稱或第二人稱。寫作時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)句的銜接，表達(dá)的連貫。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。文章中給我們推薦了一個(gè)比較適合爸爸和孩子游玩的地方，開門見(jiàn)山，并且給出的理由也比較適合，如那里的天氣很好，有吸引孩子的事情做等。文章表達(dá)流暢，注意了句與句直接的銜接，有條理。一些比較好的句式有I want to introduce a place which is suitable for dad and child to go、It is located in Zhejiang Province and it is famous for its islands.、The weather there is very mild, which is good for children、 I think you will have an unforgettable experience there等。