假如你是李華,就個(gè)人愛好帶來的困惑給英國朋友Stephen發(fā)電子郵件進(jìn)行交流并請求幫助。
要點(diǎn):
 
李華
愛好
對太空旅行感興趣;經(jīng)常到圖書館閱讀資料
困惑
得不到老師理解
觀點(diǎn)
1.個(gè)人愛好有助于學(xué)習(xí);
2. ……(至少一點(diǎn))
老師
觀點(diǎn)
時(shí)間應(yīng)花在功課上;成績就是一切
注意:1. 詞數(shù): 80個(gè)左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出的內(nèi)容不記入總詞數(shù));
2. 內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,但不要逐字翻譯;
3. 條理清楚、語句連貫;
4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名。
Dear Stephen,
I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher. I don’t know how to deal with it and would like your help.
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What shall I do? Can you offer me some suggestions? I am looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes
Li Hua

Dear Stephen,
I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher. I don’t know how to deal with it and would like your help.
You know I am crazy about space travel. In my spare time I often go to the library to find something to read. This makes my teacher very angry. To him, good marks are everything and I should spend more time on my lessons, even at weekends.
I think healthy hobbies are helpful for our studies. If I can achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobby, it will be of great value to my future development. But I don’t think my teacher understands me. I feel bad about that.
What shall I do? Can you offer me some suggestions? I am looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes
Li Hua
試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作,寫一封電子郵件談?wù)勛约旱睦Щ蟛⒄埱髱椭。本題給出的材料較為詳細(xì),故動筆前先要圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,確定寫作內(nèi)容。然后應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài),注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫,適當(dāng)使用序數(shù)詞,連接詞。
點(diǎn)評:注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題,時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語言要準(zhǔn)確、簡明,說明有條理,符合邏輯。
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