Question

下面有幾條從 “美國(guó)中學(xué)生守則”中摘錄的校規(guī)。請(qǐng)你參照這些內(nèi)容，給你們學(xué)校制定一條校規(guī)，并用事實(shí)說(shuō)明制定該校規(guī)的理由。

    American school rules

    1. Don’t cheat while taking a test.

    2. You may talk to your teacher in your seat.

    3. Please raise your hand when answering questions.

    要求：1)不使用真實(shí)的校名、人名等相關(guān)信息。不使用上面出現(xiàn)的校規(guī)。

    2)內(nèi)容完整，書寫整齊。詞數(shù)80左右。短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

    I want to make a school rule. It is

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

    I want to make a school rule. It’s “Don’t take mobile phones to school.”

    Many of my classmates take mobile phones to school. They use them to play games. Sometimes they send messages to each other in class. Sometimes they read novels at night and often feel tired and sleepy in class the next day. Sometimes they even use phones to cheat in exams.

    So I think it’s bad for students to take mobile phones to school. It affects not only themselves but also other students. What’s more, the students with phones may not be concentrated on their studies. Phones cost their parents money. （90words）

Possible version(2)

    I want to make a school rule. It is “Don’t take mobile phones to school.”

    Phones are more and more widely used, but in my opinion it’s not necessary for students to take mobile phones to school. I still remember one day in a math class, our math teacher was explaining a math problem when one of the boy students’ phone rang. All the other students turned to him. The teacher had to stop.

    It not only affected the teacher but also affected ourselves in class. On the other hand, it costs parents money to buy the phones and they have to pay for their children to use the phone. (94 words)

【解析】?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

    (1）校規(guī)明確，事實(shí)清楚，理由充分，給高分（12分以上）。

    (2)基本完成提出校規(guī)，給出事實(shí)，陳述理由，給及格左右分?jǐn)?shù)（9分上下浮動(dòng)）

    (3)重點(diǎn)看事實(shí)和理由的表述部分。通過(guò)這一部分調(diào)節(jié)總體得分。