Question

同學(xué)們，在即將畢業(yè)的日子里，班主任主持了最后一次班會課。班會主題是：《這三年你過得快樂并有所收獲嗎？》說說你的想法。
內(nèi)容參考要點(diǎn)：收獲了很多知識、友情，我很快樂；在老師表揚(yáng)時(shí)，我很快樂；在籃球比賽中，我很快樂；在幫助同學(xué)時(shí)，我很快樂；在學(xué)習(xí)喜愛的科目時(shí)，我很快樂；……。
要求：1. 短文應(yīng)包含以上1項(xiàng)或多項(xiàng)要點(diǎn)，不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名
2. 字?jǐn)?shù)80左右。短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：knowledge, friendship, cherish(珍惜); favorite subject, praise, as long as…; not only… but also…;
We are about to graduate from Junior High School soon. When we look back to the school life I spent over the past three years, we would ask ourselves a question: “Am I happy and rich?” The answer is “yes”. There are many reasons why I am happy and rich below:

Answer 1

During the past three years, I have received much knowledge and friendship ,I am very happy. When the teacher praises me ,I am very happy. In the basketball match, I am very happy. When I help others. I am very happy. When I study my favourite subject, I am very happy. When I  improve  a lot in my studies,  I become proud. .When my friends help me out of the trouble, I am very happy.

這是一篇命題作文，介紹自己三年來的收獲.動筆前先要根據(jù)要點(diǎn)確定寫作內(nèi)容,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意應(yīng)用所給單詞.在寫作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規(guī)范性。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語的搭配問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。