Question

作文。（15分）

根據(jù)提示寫一篇80詞左右的短文： 李明是一名學(xué)生，學(xué)習(xí)認(rèn)真，成績優(yōu)異并樂于助人，他最喜歡的顏色是藍(lán)色，因?yàn)樗{(lán)色代表寧靜，當(dāng)他生氣或激動(dòng)的時(shí)候，藍(lán)色常能讓他平靜下來，他喜愛寧靜、和平，希望世界上沒有戰(zhàn)爭，永遠(yuǎn)和平。

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Answer 1

Li Ming is a model student. He’s clever and he’s helpful, too. He often helps teachers and young students at school. He is good at Chinese, Math, English, music and so on. He has a lot of hobbies. He likes listening to music and reading books. Sometimes we listen to music together. He likes summer because he can swim in the summer holiday. His favorite color is blue. When he gets angry and excited, the blue make him calm down . he likes peace. He hopes that there is no war in the world.

【解析】

試題分析：本書面表達(dá)是介紹Li Ming。所以本文的人稱應(yīng)該是第三人稱，在完成句子是應(yīng)特別注意動(dòng)詞的單三形式，如has 、is、lives、likes等。在寫作時(shí)，要盡量利用上所給的提示內(nèi)容，表達(dá)時(shí)應(yīng)使句型順暢并符合英語的習(xí)慣表達(dá)方法。注意連詞的運(yùn)用，盡量少用排比句，因?yàn)橛⒄Z最忌諱重復(fù)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】介紹了Li Ming的愛好，性格以及所喜歡的顏色。內(nèi)容豐富，語言表述準(zhǔn)確流暢。經(jīng)典句型結(jié)構(gòu)運(yùn)用到位。

考點(diǎn)：提綱式作文