Question

請用以下的詞語介紹你的臥室，至少8句話。

bed，bookcase，books，computer，table，chair，schoolbag，ball，under，on

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

This is my bedroom. It’s tidy and clean. There is a computer ,a table ,a bed , a chair and a bookcase in it .My computer is on the table. The hat is on the chair. Where are my books? Oh, they’re in the bookcase. The quilt is on the bed. I have a ball under the table. And my schoolbag is on the bed. Look! Those are my pens and pencils in the pencil case.

This is my bedroom, it’s very nice. And I like it.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用所給要求來完成文章，所以在寫作時，尤其要寫出我的臥室里擺放的物品，以及物品擺放的位置。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭指出我的臥室擺放的物品，接下來寫物品擺放的位置，最稱贊自己的臥室漂亮。此處用了 on the table. on the chair.under the table.in the pencil case.等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。

考點：提綱作文。