Question

假設(shè)Mike是你遠(yuǎn)在美國(guó)的朋友，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇60詞左右的短文。
①M(fèi)ike的學(xué)校離家約6千米，他通常騎自行車去上學(xué)，下雨時(shí)坐公共汽車；
②父親在醫(yī)院工作，醫(yī)院離家很遠(yuǎn)，每天開(kāi)車去上班，大約花40分鐘；
③母親在銀行工作，常坐地鐵去上班。
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    

Answer 1

Mike is my friend in America . He is a student in a middle school . The school is about six  kilometers from his home, he usually goes by bike.When it rains, he takes a bus , How about his parents ?His father works in a hospital .It’s very far, so he has to drive there every day. It takes him about forty minutes.  His mother works in a bank.It’s a bit far. She often goes there by subway.

試題分析：本書面表達(dá)，是介紹一個(gè)朋友Mike。所以本文的人稱應(yīng)該是第三人稱，應(yīng)特別注意動(dòng)詞的單數(shù)第三人稱形式，注意加s的規(guī)則。在寫作時(shí)，盡量使句型順暢并符合英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣表達(dá)方法。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：在寫書面表達(dá)是首先要注意的問(wèn)題就是人稱，不能混淆人稱；其次，應(yīng)注意動(dòng)詞的英語(yǔ)，根據(jù)不同的人稱確定動(dòng)詞的形式；再次，句型應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；最后，用自己熟練掌握的句型造句。