Question

書面表達(dá)（共1小題，計(jì)15分）

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的英文短詩(shī)，展開適當(dāng)?shù)南胂螅瑢懸黄�短文�?標(biāo)題為：My Teacher Mr. Moore

There's a teacher Mr. Moore,

Who is lovely and thirty-four.

Always encouraging us to try,

He leads us to a world of "why”.

We all love him more and more.

注意：

1．不得照抄短詩(shī)原文。

2．必須結(jié)合短詩(shī)的內(nèi)容，發(fā)揮想象，適當(dāng)展開。

3．必須突出短詩(shī)的主題，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)意連貫。

4．短文不能寫成詩(shī)歌形式。

5．詞數(shù)：80左右。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My Teacher Mr. Moore

Of all my teachers, I like Mr. Moore most. Though he is 34, he looks very young for his age. And he’s one of the most popular teachers in our school.

Mr. Moore has his own way to make his classes lively and interesting. In his opinion, we should not only know “what”, but also understand “why”. So, instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourages us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions.

He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇文章要求我們按照標(biāo)題為：My Teacher Mr. Moore的詩(shī)歌寫一篇作文，作文結(jié)合詩(shī)歌的內(nèi)容，突出詩(shī)歌的主題，以短文形式寫出來(lái)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文大量運(yùn)用形容詞比較級(jí)，最高級(jí)。Of all my teachers, I like Mr. Moore most. Though he is 34, he looks very young for his age. And he’s one of the most popular teachers in our school..巧妙運(yùn)用詞組not only ，but also，instead of.定語(yǔ)從句的巧妙運(yùn)用He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much.。這些語(yǔ)法的運(yùn)用是文章活靈活現(xiàn)。