Question

同學(xué)們，你們還記得初中生活中班會(huì)課上的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴滴嗎？一次精彩的討論；一次出色的表演；一次激烈的競(jìng)賽……請(qǐng)你記述一次在班會(huì)課上對(duì)你影響很深（affect…deeply）的經(jīng)歷吧！

要求：1.請(qǐng)根據(jù)所提供的信息材料和話題（不要逐句翻譯），寫(xiě)出結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、內(nèi)容完整、語(yǔ)言豐富優(yōu)美、語(yǔ)法準(zhǔn)確、可讀性強(qiáng)的短文。

2.至少80詞

3. 不得使用真實(shí)姓名、地名和學(xué)校名。

4.  題目自擬。

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Answer 1

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Last Monday we talked about the advantages and disadvantages of keeping pets. Some students think that more and more people keep pets nowadays. Animals become our good friends. Keeping pets can bring us a lot of fun. Especially for some old people, pets can make them feel less lonely.

But some students don’t agree. They think it is not good to keep pets. They need to spend a lot of time taking care of them. When the pets get sick, they need to send them to hospital, and that will cost them a lot of money. What’ worse, Pets will often make our room dirty. Most of us hate it.

In my opinion, I think if the pets are cheap and easy to keep, just like goldfish, we can keep them.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己印象深刻的一次經(jīng)歷。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，選擇自己熟悉的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要記述的是過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，故時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。人稱為第一人稱。句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。文中適當(dāng)使用代詞，注意避免句式的單調(diào)重復(fù)，避免單詞及語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文