Question

地球是我們?nèi)祟惞餐�的家園。“低碳、環(huán)�！币殉蔀楫�(dāng)今時(shí)代主題。目前，我市英語學(xué)會(huì)準(zhǔn)備在全市中學(xué)生中開展以“Save(拯救）our earth”為主題的英文征文活動(dòng)�，F(xiàn)請你根據(jù)以下三個(gè)方面的提示，寫一篇70詞左右的短文參評。
1.重要性：只有一個(gè)地球
2.主要問題：污染、疾病、災(zāi)難
3.措施：停止污染、保護(hù)大自然
參考詞匯：disaster n.災(zāi)難  protect V. 保護(hù)
注意：(1)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名；
(2)文章標(biāo)題已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
(3)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。
Save Our Earth
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Answer 1

We all live in the earth. The earth is our home. We have only one earth. We must take care of it. It gives us the best environment. If we harm it, it will be angry. And then we will have a terrible end. There are three problems in our earth, they are pollution, disaster and illness.
It’s our duty to protect our environment. So we must plant more trees, protect the flowers and the trees, reduce the pollution.
Protecting the nature is very important. It’s our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy. If everyone makes a contribution to protect the environment, the earth will become much more beautiful.

試題分析：本題要求寫一篇保護(hù)環(huán)境的議論文。要求中已經(jīng)給出了主要要點(diǎn)，因此要求我們自由發(fā)揮的地方較多，只是需要注意不能遺留要求中的要點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前先要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤，寫好后反復(fù)讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改。
點(diǎn)評：本題難度較大，由于給出信息較少，故解題前需要自己組織整理材料�？上雀鶕�(jù)要求列出簡要提綱，然后在動(dòng)筆寫作，不跑題偏題是做好書面表達(dá)的前提條件。