Question

我市將承辦2014年第15屆省運(yùn)會(huì)，為此組委會(huì)委托某英語報(bào)社向全社會(huì)征集建議，假設(shè)你是李平，請(qǐng)聯(lián)系實(shí)際，就“政府部門，市民(citizens)及學(xué)生該為辦好這次盛會(huì)做些什么？”提出建議．

 

 

 

要求：

1.根據(jù)所提供的信息，給該報(bào)社寫”一封建議信；

2.詞數(shù)：80詞左右（開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；

3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．

Dear Editor ,

My name is Li ping , a middle school student . I’m excited to know that the 15^th Games of Fujian Province will be held in our city in 2014 . To make it successful ,

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Yours ,

Li Ping

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Dear Editor,

 My name is Li ping , a middle school student . I’m excited to know that the 15th Games of Fujian Province will be held in our city in 2014 . To make it successful , the government is supposed to build more new gyms for the players and take more measures to improve the environment Of our city. Besides, the citizens ought to be polite and ready to help others. They had better talk with others in Putonghua. They should try their best to keep the city clean and tidy. As students, we should do more exercise to keep fit and try to be volunteers of the Games.

 In a word, if everyone makes a contribution, the Games will be more successful.

                                                                         Yours,

                                                                         Li Ping

【解析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封建議信。給出的材料比較簡略，故動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀提示，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫，為了使說明更具邏輯性，適當(dāng)使用序數(shù)詞。