Question

書面表達(dá)：（20分）

很多同學(xué)都有出游的經(jīng)歷，有些可能是有趣的，有些是驚險(xiǎn)的，而有些卻是發(fā)人深省的，請以“A/An...Experience”為題，描述你在出游中遇到的一次難忘的小插曲。內(nèi)容提示：When and where did it happen? What happened? Why was it so unforgettable?（難忘的）

要求：1.中心突出，語意連貫，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范 2.詞數(shù)不少于80。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

An Unforgettable Experience

Last Sunday I went to visit the Great Wall with my friends. We went there by bus. It was hot and windy that day. There were thousands of people. When we saw a group of foreigners. We went up and talked with them. We told them lots of history of the Great Wall and the Chinese culture. They were very surprised when they saw that our English were excellent. They were also very interested in the Chinese culture. They thanked us a lot and we really had a good time. We felt proud of ourselves and being Chinese. I will remember this experience forever.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們以An Unforgettable Experience為題寫一篇短文。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的寫作提綱，主要包括：一、When and where did it happen?二、What happened?三、Why was it so unforgettable? 寫作提綱雖然已經(jīng)給出，但是很多其他內(nèi)容都需要我們自己去充實(shí)，讓它變得完整、合理，內(nèi)容豐富，這就需要花費(fèi)我們的想象力，以及我們平時(shí)積累的知識(shí)。另外，寫作時(shí)，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者根據(jù)寫作提綱,講述了自己難忘的經(jīng)歷。層次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯(cuò)。如There were thousands of people. We felt proud of ourselves and being Chinese.等。這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如They were also very interested in the Chinese culture.等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。