Question

書面表達(dá)
寫一篇有關(guān)你和你就讀的學(xué)校開展體育活動(dòng)的短文。
要求：所寫短文必須包括以下提示要點(diǎn)；意思表達(dá)清楚，文句通順，連貫，單詞拼寫正確，標(biāo)點(diǎn)無(wú)誤；至少寫出7個(gè)句子，字?jǐn)?shù)70左右。(不包括已經(jīng)給出的句子)
要點(diǎn)：
1. 學(xué)校每年秋季舉辦運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)，去年運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)上你獲跳遠(yuǎn)第一名。
2. 同學(xué)們通常有早鍛煉，做眼保健操，課后有時(shí)打籃球或踢足球。
3. 介紹你最喜歡(favourite)參加和觀看的運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目。
4. 運(yùn)動(dòng)有益于身體健康(health)，你準(zhǔn)備進(jìn)行更多鍛煉。
My School Sport
I study at No. 2 Middle School.

Answer 1

My School Sport
I study at No. 2 Middle School. There is a sports meeting in our school every autumn/Our school holds a sports meeting every autumn/A sports meeting is held in our school every autumn. I took the first place/was first in the long jump/won the long jump last year. We usually take exercise in the early morning. We do eye exercises in the afternoon. After school/class we play basketball or football. My favourite sport is football/I like football best. I often watch a football match on TV on Sundays. I think(doing)sport is good for our health/(doing) sport makes us heathier and stronger. I am going to take/do more exercise/do more sport.

解析試題分析：這題是要點(diǎn)作文，可以根據(jù)要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行翻譯，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容。根據(jù)要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容可知要用簡(jiǎn)單句，包括主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。寫作時(shí)要靈活運(yùn)用，注意主謂一致，單詞拼寫正確。注意應(yīng)用所給短語(yǔ)和單詞。
考點(diǎn)：要點(diǎn)作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：要點(diǎn)作文因?yàn)橐�點(diǎn)已經(jīng)很明確，只要將要點(diǎn)翻譯清楚就可以，要注意使用英語(yǔ)的句型翻譯，可以避免出現(xiàn)漢語(yǔ)表達(dá)。