Question

假設(shè)下面是你的筆友Peter的一些信息。請根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容，寫一篇短文介紹一下他的情況。
要求：①語句通順，合符邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
②詞數(shù)100字左右。開頭和結(jié)尾以給出，不計入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)。
1. 年齡及外貌：出生于1997年8月23號，圓臉，長鼻，戴一副圓眼睛因為……
2. 飲食：健康，多吃水果蔬菜，很少吃垃圾食品。
3. 性格：慷慨大方，樂于助人（舉一例）……
4. 愛好：旅行，到過許多名勝，他認為……
5. 夢想之家：遠離城市，靠近大海，有一個帶游泳池的三層樓房。
I am very glad to introduce my best friend Peter to you.
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This is my penfriend , what about yours?

Answer 1

I am very glad to introduce my best friend Peter to you.。
He was born on August 23, 1997。He is medium height and he has round face, long nose, wears a pair of glasses. It makes him funny.
He eats more fruit and vegetables, seldom eats junk food.He has a good balanced diet.so he is in good health.
He is kind and easy-going and he is also generous and ready to help others. He can get along well with others. Once I was ill and I could not go to school.He offered to help me with my study. I was moved.
Traveling is his hobby.He has  been to many places of interest, he thinks that Traveling can make himself relaxed,and also can open up hie eyes to the outside world.
In his heart , he has a dream house.It must be  away from the city, near the sea, The house is very big.There was a three-floor building with a swimming pool in it .
This is my penfriend , what about yours?

試題分析：這是一篇列提綱式的給材料作文。所給材料十分詳細，寫作時注意時態(tài)和人稱代詞的正確。
【亮點說明】這篇短文內(nèi)容全面，要點突出，注意到了時態(tài)的正確運用，同時能用上較好的句式和短語。如Traveling can make himself relaxed,and also can open up hie eyes to the outside world.，Once， In his heart，be  away from等。