Question

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的提示，寫一篇關(guān)于愛好的文章。

In the past	Now	Reason
Play computer games	play basketball, listen to the music	be bad for eyes, make new friends, help…relax,…

要求：1、文章要體現(xiàn)表格中的所有提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2、詞數(shù)不少于60詞。

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Answer 1

I used to play computer games after class . But it was very bad for my eyes.Now I enjoy playing basketball. It is good for my health and I get much stronger. And I can make new friends as well. I also enjoy listening to music. It helps me relax after class.Good hobbies can help people a lot. So I hope everyone can have good hobbies and live happily.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。寫出順序的詞來(lái)表達(dá)文意更清楚。完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文進(jìn)行了較為全面的說(shuō)明，能用簡(jiǎn)短的詞匯表達(dá)出提綱的內(nèi)容，并且進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)?shù)奶幚�，�?zhǔn)確的添加自己的觀點(diǎn)，同時(shí)使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。