Question

最近，學(xué)校一項(xiàng)關(guān)于“幸福是什么”的調(diào)查顯示，大多數(shù)學(xué)生認(rèn)為“取得好成績(jī)”、“得到老師、父母的關(guān)愛”、“與同學(xué)相處融洽”是決定自己是否幸福的重要因素。假如你是Green，將于下周在全校升旗儀式上就“What is happiness?”為題發(fā)表演講，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示用英文寫一篇80詞左右的演講稿。

要點(diǎn)提示：

介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果；

闡述你的看法 ；

提出獲得幸福的方法。

要求：1.開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2.文中須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。

3.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。

What is happiness?

I’m standing here to tell you about the result of the survey. Most students think

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

I’m standing here to tell you about the result of the survey. Most students think happiness is to get a good score;to get the love of their parents or teachers;to get well along with others and so on. When I receive this answer, I will frown with unhappiness.Are these real happiness?

In a way, if you want to be a person with a lot of happiness, then try to be like this:

1. Be a kind, helpful and friendly person.

2. Be a person with a lot of smiles.

Well, the more work, the less words, let’s begin to work hard now. Try to be a good person, then you will not feel sorry about yourself when you grow up. It’s the best happiness for everyone, I think.Work hard is good. But don’t forget your friends and your family after work. Spend more time with them and you’ll have more happiness.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是首先用正確的英語把調(diào)查結(jié)果表達(dá)出來，還有給出自己的看法并提出獲取幸福的方法。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如：try to do sth“盡力做某事”；the+比較級(jí)，the+比較級(jí)“越…，越…”；feel sorry about“對(duì)…感到難過”以及一些復(fù)合句和動(dòng)詞不定式的使用。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。