Question

書面表達(dá)（共15分）

假如你是李紅，是一名新轉(zhuǎn)入的外地學(xué)生，幾個(gè)星期來，老師和同學(xué)們對你的關(guān)心和幫助讓你倍感溫暖。請你根據(jù)下面提示語寫一則日記，敘述這幾個(gè)星期以來他們對你的關(guān)心、幫助以及你的感受和愿望。

生活方面：1.同學(xué)們從家中帶來當(dāng)?shù)乜煽诘氖澄锝o我吃；

2.同學(xué)們帶我參觀校園，周末邀請我到他們家做客；

3.下午放學(xué)后，同學(xué)們經(jīng)常帶我去操場跑步；

思想方面：老師、同學(xué)們找我談心，和我交朋友。

學(xué)習(xí)方面：······

感受和愿望：······

要求：1.詞數(shù)80~100

2.要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

參考詞匯：當(dāng)?shù)氐? local 談心talk with

6th June

My teachers and classmates have helped me a iot since I came here.They brought

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

6th June

My teachers and classmates have helped me a lot since I came here. They brought me local food from their homes. They were very delicious. My classmates showed me around our school. They even invited me to their homes, watching TV and enjoying dinner. After school they often ran and played volleyball with me in the playground. They came to talk with me when we were free. We have been good friends. They helped me with my lessons. When I had problems, I went to them for help. I feel very happy here. I hope to make more friends and make progress in my studies.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，要求根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫一則日記。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語是第三人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。在寫作時(shí)還要注意日記的格式。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: show around帶領(lǐng)……參觀; help sb with sth幫助某人做某事；They came to talk with me when we were free.和When I had problems, I went to them for help等,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。