Question

書面表達(dá)

上個(gè)月，你們學(xué)校開展了“文明規(guī)范月”活動(dòng)，活動(dòng)以來發(fā)生了很大變化。假如你是班長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容提示，代表同學(xué)們進(jìn)行總結(jié)發(fā)言，總結(jié)你身邊同學(xué)的不同表現(xiàn)，同時(shí)發(fā)表自己的看法。

要求：

1．表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；

2．必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3．詞數(shù)不少于90，開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

How time flies! Great changes have taken place in our school since we took part in the civilized norms month activity．Now most of us can act better than before．________________

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解析：

One possible version 　　How time flies! Great changes have taken place in our school since we took part in the civilized norms month activity． Now most of us can act better than before．We can get on well with our teachers and classmates．Some of us are so careful that we often help close the windows or the doors or turn off the lights．Some of us are kind enough to help the students in need． 　　Sadly, some of us pay no attention to what they are doing．For example, they care nothing about the environment．Sometimes they throw away rubbish here and there, and make a lot of noise in public．They are too impatient to wait in line．A few of us say bad words or quarrel with others． 　　In my opinion, as a student, we should act in a polite way．I hope we will have more activities like this．So we can learn more from these activities．I'm sure we can live happily if we try our best． 　　書面表達(dá)：評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)： 　　先根據(jù)文章整體內(nèi)容和語言表達(dá)確定檔次，然后在該檔次內(nèi)評(píng)出分?jǐn)?shù)。 　　第五檔(15－13分)完全符合題目要求，表達(dá)清楚，信息完整，語言通順，語意連貫，字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)標(biāo)，基本或完全沒有語言錯(cuò)誤。 　　第四檔(12－10分)符合題目要求，表達(dá)基本清楚，信息較完整，語言基本通順，語意基本連貫。有少量語言錯(cuò)誤，但不影響整體理解。 　　第三檔(9－7分)基本符合題目要求，表達(dá)不夠清楚，信息不夠完整，語言欠通順，有部分語言錯(cuò)誤，影響 整體理解。 　　第二檔(6－4分)部分內(nèi)容符合題目要求，內(nèi)容不完整，表達(dá)不清楚，信息不完整，有較多語言錯(cuò)誤，所寫 內(nèi)容難以理解。 　　第一檔(3－0分)與題目有關(guān)的內(nèi)容不多，不能表達(dá)自己的思想。只是簡(jiǎn)單拼湊提示詞語。