Question

作文：假設(shè)你叫李明，你們班級(jí)要選拔新班長(zhǎng)，你想向班主任王老師推薦張航。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，寫一封80詞左右的推薦信給王老師。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

姓名	張航
特長(zhǎng)	精通電腦，擅長(zhǎng)演講
性格、品質(zhì)	自信、勤奮、謙虛、有條理、樂于助人
個(gè)人事跡	經(jīng)�；ê芏鄷r(shí)間組織課外活動(dòng)，從不介意為班級(jí)做額外的工作，總是盡最大努力幫助同學(xué)，深受同學(xué)們歡迎。

Dear Mr Wang,

I’m writing to recommend Zhang Hang as our new monitor.

 

 

 

 

I hope you can consider my recommendation.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr Wang, 

I’m writing to recommend Zhang Hang as our new monitor. 

I think he has some strong qualities for this position. Zhang Hang is confident. He is good at making speeches. He also does well in computers.

He is hard-working, modest and organized. He often spends lots of time organizing after-school activities. 

He is very helpful too. He never minds doing extra work for our class. He always tries his best to help other students. He is very popular with us.

I think Zhang Hang is the most suitable person to be our monitor.

I hope you can consider my recommendation.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：試題分析：這篇短文要求我們推薦張航來做我們的新班長(zhǎng)，從三方面來介紹張航的情況。是一篇人物介紹的文章。

本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語是第三人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者從那幾個(gè)方面，一一介紹的很詳細(xì)，沒有遺漏任何的知識(shí)點(diǎn)。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如I think he has some strong qualities for this position. He never minds doing extra work for our class. He always tries his best to help other students. He is very popular with us.等，運(yùn)用了大量的固定短語，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。