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假如你是班長(zhǎng)，學(xué)期結(jié)束時(shí)你要給同學(xué)作簡(jiǎn)短的評(píng)價(jià)。你班的李華這個(gè)學(xué)期變化很大，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇簡(jiǎn)評(píng)。

過(guò)去	功課不好，常與同學(xué)爭(zhēng)吵，垃圾被他撒的滿地都是，課桌總是一團(tuán)糟。
現(xiàn)在	自從老師和他溝通后，有了很大變化。（學(xué)習(xí)、與同學(xué)相處、生活……）
結(jié)果	父母、老師對(duì)他很滿意。
希望	在即將到來(lái)的考試中取得好成績(jī)。

注意：
短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；
括號(hào)部分須用3、4句話展開(kāi)合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Answer 1

Li Hua has improved a lot this term. In the past he didn’t do well in his subjects. He often quarreled with his classmates. Rubbish was spread all over the floor by him. His desk was always in a mess. He has changed a lot since the teacher had communication with him. Now he works hard at his lessons. He gets along well with his classmates. He often sweeps the floor. His parents and teachers are satisfied with him. I hope he will get good grades in the coming exam. (82 words)

解析試題分析：本文的寫(xiě)作對(duì)李華的過(guò)去的情況進(jìn)行描寫(xiě)，不擅長(zhǎng)于功課he didn’t do well in his subjects.與朋友吵架quarreled with his classmates. 垃圾被他撒的滿地都是Rubbish was spread all over the floor by him. 課桌總是一團(tuán)糟His desk was always in a mess.然后對(duì)他現(xiàn)在的情況進(jìn)行描寫(xiě)，如與同學(xué)能很好的相處gets along well with his classmates.等，再對(duì)現(xiàn)在的結(jié)果是父母、老師對(duì)他很滿意His parents and teachers are satisfied with him.最后提出希望I hope he will get good grades in the coming exam.
考點(diǎn)：提綱式寫(xiě)作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文不難寫(xiě)，對(duì)于作文的寫(xiě)作要注意詳略得當(dāng)，學(xué)生在平時(shí)的練習(xí)、學(xué)習(xí)生活中要善于積累常用的表達(dá)多個(gè)好處的句型。英語(yǔ)的寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中切忌使用重復(fù)的表達(dá)，對(duì)于不會(huì)表達(dá)的意思要學(xué)會(huì)替換，同時(shí)注意用平時(shí)在課本中或是閱讀中積累的單詞句型來(lái)自如的表達(dá)自己的意思，這樣文章才能寫(xiě)出新意，寫(xiě)出文采。