Question

假如你是Tim，你的朋友Larry感冒了，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)寫一封60字左右的電子郵件給他：給他一些建議，并祝他身體健康; 你的理想職業(yè)是將來(lái)做一名英語(yǔ)老師并說(shuō)明理由; 你的英語(yǔ)老師給你的評(píng)語(yǔ)。(所給提示語(yǔ)必須用上)

Advice: go to see a doctor, take some medicine, do more exercise Dream job: an English teacher Reason: like English very much Your English report card: can do better

Dear Larry,
I’m sorry to hear that you have a cold. I think you should            
                                                                          
                                                                          
                                                                          
                                                                          
                                                                          
                                                                          
Yours，
Tim

Answer 1

(One possible version)
Dear Lary,
I am sorry to hear that you have a cold. I think you should go to see a doctor and take some medicine. You had better do more exercise. By the way, I want to tell you my dream job. I want to be an English teacher in the future because I like English very much. And I got my English report card. My English teacher said I could do better. I hope you will be better soon.
Yours,
Tim

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封信。本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，然后應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。