假定你叫張強(qiáng),是北京陽光中學(xué)(Beijing Sunshine Secondary Schoo1)的一名初二學(xué)生。上星期天你從報上看到觀鳥俱樂部(the Birdwatching Club)的招聘廣告。請你寫封簡短的應(yīng)聘信,介紹自己的情況(見下表),表示愿意為俱樂部做一些工作,并請俱樂部負(fù)責(zé)人考慮并盡早予以答復(fù)。

注意:1.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。

????? 2.詞數(shù)80左右。

Dear sir,

? I read your ad in the newspaper last SundayNow Im writing to tell you Id like to become a member of the Birdwatching Club

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Best wishes,

Yours sincerely,

Zhang Qiang

 

【答案】

Dear sir,

? I read your ad in the newspaper last Sunday. Now Im writing to tell you Id like to become a member of the Birdwatching Club.

? Im a 15-year-old student in Grade 8 at Beijing Sunshine secondary school. My favourite subjects are P.E. and science. Im very interested in travelling and playing basketball, and Im quite healthy. Im also an animal lover, so I love birds and nature very much. Last year I wrote a report on the endangered animals for our school newspaper.

? I think it is very important for me to do something to protect birds.

? I will be very happy if I can become a member of your club. You can call me on 010-8255668 or e-mail me at zhangqiang@163.com.

? Best wishes

【解析】

試題分析:這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作,寫一封應(yīng)聘信。由于給出的材料比較全面,我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),第一人稱,注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫。

【亮點說明】這篇短文語言要準(zhǔn)確、簡明,說明有條理,準(zhǔn)確地闡明了自己基本愛好和特長,并包含了文中所要求的全部信息,符合應(yīng)聘信的格式和要求。其中使用了一些固定句式和短語,包含復(fù)合形容詞的準(zhǔn)確使用為文章增色不少.a 15-year-old student,Im very interested in travelling and playing basketballit is very important for me to do something學(xué)習(xí)中再注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點:提綱作文。

 

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假定你叫張強(qiáng),是北京陽光中學(xué)(Beijing Sunshine Secondary School)的一名初二學(xué)生。上星期天你從報上看到觀鳥俱樂部(the Birdwatching Club)的招聘廣告。請你寫封簡短的應(yīng)聘信,介紹自己的情況(見下表),表示愿意為俱樂部做一些工作,并請俱樂部負(fù)責(zé)人考慮并盡早予以答復(fù)。

注意:1.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。

2.詞數(shù)不少于80。

Dear Sir,

  I read your ad in the newspaper last Sunday.Now I’m writing to tell you I’d like to become a member of the Birdwatching Club.

_____________________________________

  Best wishes,

Yours sincerely,

Zhang Qiang

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