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根據(jù)所給的兩幅畫，以“Wang Hai was ill”為題，至少寫八句話，要求意思明確，內(nèi)容必須符合題意，圖片下方的單詞供選用．

fall ill worry help

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學(xué)生：習(xí)作： Wang Hai Was Ill 　　Wang Hai was one of my classmates. He was also my neighbour. One day he fell ill and had been away from school for several days. Everyone in our class was worried about his study and healthy(X1). I decide(X2) to help him after school. 　　Lying in bed, Wang Hai was happy to see me. He asked me a lot of questions about our class. I was deep(X3) moved by his concern. 　　Under(X4) the help of my classmates and me. Wang Hai caught up with us at(X5) study soon after the illness. 　　剖析：1．“他的健康”應(yīng)用名詞health． 　　2．全文講的都是過(guò)去的事，因此時(shí)態(tài)要一致，decide要改為decided． 　　3．“我被他的關(guān)心深深感動(dòng)”應(yīng)用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，因此deep應(yīng)改為deeply． 　　4．“在……的幫助下”為固定短語(yǔ)“with the help of”，因此，要把Under改為With． 　　5．“在……方面趕上他人”應(yīng)用“catch up with sb in sth”，所以文中的at要改為in． 　　總評(píng)：本文既描寫了同學(xué)們對(duì)王海的關(guān)心，王海對(duì)同學(xué)們的牽掛，又反映了同學(xué)們互幫互助的友愛(ài)精神，是一篇主題突出、層次分明的好文章．