Question

初二年級(1)班的學(xué)生去郊外遠(yuǎn)足，在回家的路上，李明在樹下發(fā)現(xiàn)了一只小鳥，它的翅膀(wing)有點(diǎn)問題，不能飛了。李明把它帶回家，細(xì)心照顧它�，F(xiàn)在小鳥好多了，小華打算讓它飛回藍(lán)天，因為藍(lán)天才是它真正的家。

The students of Class 1, Grade 2 went hiking for a field trip.

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Answer 1

On the way home, Li Ming found a little bird under a tree. There was something wrong with its wing. / Something was wrong with its wing. It couldn't fly. Li Ming brought it home and took good care of it

/looked after it well. Now the bird is better. Li Ming is going to let it fly back to the blue sky because the blue sky is the bird's real home.

【解析】此題描述了李明的一次特殊經(jīng)歷，遇到一只受傷的小鳥，經(jīng)過自己的細(xì)心照料又把小鳥放飛藍(lán)天的過程。此文要用到現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和過去時態(tài)，要注意時態(tài)的正確運(yùn)用，還要注意語句的正確表達(dá)，多用些高級詞匯以增強(qiáng)文章的文采。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者把列舉的要點(diǎn)都寫了進(jìn)去。這些內(nèi)容也比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如Li Ming brought it home and took good care of it

/looked after it well. Li Ming is going to let it fly back to the blue sky because the blue sky is the bird's real home.等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。