Question

書面表達(dá)（滿分15分）

假設(shè)你是Andrew，你的好友Nick最近在微博上說學(xué)習(xí)壓力特大，很擔(dān)心即將到來的考試。請你回復(fù)他的微博，給他一些建議。提示如下：

1、不要過分憂慮，靜下心來；

2、做好學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃，認(rèn)真完成每項(xiàng)任務(wù)；

3、多跟父母交流，得到理解；

4、保持自信，相信付出就會有收獲。

要求：

1、要點(diǎn)完整、層次清晰；

2、語法正確、上下文連貫。可適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。

3、詞數(shù)80個左右，開頭已給，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Nick,

As for your problem, I want to share my opinions with you.

 

 

 

Best wishes!

Yours,

Andrew

 

Answer 1

Dear Nick,

As for your problem, I want to share my opinions with you.

Many students of our age have great stress too. So there is no need to be too nervous about coming exams. You should clam yourself down. I think it’s a good way to relax yourself by taking a walk after supper every day or doing some sports. Then, you should make a plan for your study because you should know what to do at any time. You will make sure you complete each task on time. Besides that, communication with your parents is also important. You can make your parents understand you better. Last but not least, keeping confident about yourself will bring in good results.

I hope my advice will be worth taking.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Andrew

【解析】

試題分析：這是小作者給自己的好朋友Nick寫的一封信，信中給他一些學(xué)習(xí)建議，讓其減輕學(xué)習(xí)壓力。小作者把要求寫的幾點(diǎn)都表述得很清晰。另外，寫作時，小作者還注意了語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者把列舉的要點(diǎn)都寫了進(jìn)去。這些內(nèi)容也比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如So there is no need to be too nervous about coming exams. I think it’s a good way to relax yourself by taking a walk after supper every day or doing some sports. Then, you should make a plan for your study because you should know what to do at any time.等賓語從句。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。