Question

每個(gè)人都有朋友，你一定有自己的好朋友吧。寫一篇短文，把你的好朋友康康(KangKang)向大家做一個(gè)介紹, 康康的情況如下所示：
1. 男孩，12歲, 來(lái)自中國(guó)；             2. 矮個(gè), 黑色的短發(fā)；
3. 圓臉, 大鼻子, 小嘴巴, 大眼睛；       4. 他穿藍(lán)色大衣和黑色褲子；
5. 我們是好朋友，在同一年級(jí)，但不同班級(jí)。
6. 我們長(zhǎng)得一樣，但穿不同的衣服。 （要求：不少于60詞。所給要點(diǎn)都要寫）
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Answer 1

I have a good friend .His name is Kangkang. Kangkang is a 12-year-old boy,he is from China.We look the same .He is short.He has short black hair.I have short brown hair.He has a round face.I have a round face,too.He has a big nose and a wide mouth .He also have big eyes.
We often wears different clothes.He always wears a blue coat and black trousers.I often wear red clothes.We are good friends. We are in the same grade but in different classes.We often play together.
Can you tell me about your friend?

試題分析：這篇作文屬于提綱作文，它列巨額了詳細(xì)的條目。同學(xué)們?cè)谧鲞@篇作文的時(shí)候需要把條理理清，動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本篇范文段落詳細(xì)，第一段寫康康的情況，第二段寫我們康康的不同點(diǎn)。最后一句用反問(wèn)結(jié)尾，發(fā)人深思。這里有很多短語(yǔ)如look the same,wear different clothes 等等。