Question

請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇介紹你理想中的學(xué)校的作文，須包含下列要點(diǎn)，

1. 學(xué)校在早晨9點(diǎn)開(kāi)始上課，下午3點(diǎn)放學(xué)。我們有足夠的時(shí)間可以去參加課外活動(dòng)。

2. 學(xué)校有一個(gè)很大的食堂，里面有各種新鮮和健康的食物。

3. 學(xué)校一邊有一個(gè)公園，公園是個(gè)休息的好地方。另一邊有一個(gè)博物館。

4. 老師們對(duì)我們很親切，我們每天只有半個(gè)小時(shí)的家作，周末甚至沒(méi)有作業(yè)

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My Ideal School

My ideal school stars at 9:00 a.m.. and finishes at 3:00 p.m. We have enough time to take part in the after-school activities.

My ideal school has a very big dining hall. There are different kinds of fresh and healthy food in it.

There is a park on one side of the school and a museum on the other side. The park is a good place to rest in.

The teachers are very kind to us. We only have half an hour of homework every day. We don't even have homework at weeekends.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。.如There are different kinds of fresh and healthy food in it. We have enough time to take part in the after-school activities.等，only等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。