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近幾年，家長開車接送孩子上下學(xué)已經(jīng)普遍，人們對此看法各異，有些人認(rèn)為接送孩子上學(xué)安全，可以讓孩子有更多的休息時間，而且父母可以更好地和孩子溝通，而另一些人認(rèn)為這會造成交通堵塞(traffic jams),特別是高峰期(rush hours),而且這樣的會使孩子更多地依賴父母。

請陳述這些觀點，并表明自己的看法。

注意：1.語法正確，語意連貫，不要逐字翻譯；

2.80詞左右。文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

These years it’s common that parents drive their children to school and back home. Different people have different ideas about that.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

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These years it’s common that parents drive their children to school and back home. Different people have different ideas about that.

Some people think it’s good to drive their children to school. They think it’s safer to send the kids to school in their car. And children can also have more time to rest in the car or at home. Parents can communicate better with their kids. While others disagree. They think driving kids to school can cause traffic jams, especially in rush hours. Besides, it can make kids depend on parents too much. I think children should go to school by themselves. They can go on foot, by bike or by bus. It’s good for both their health and environment.

【解析】

試題分析：近幾年，家長開車接送孩子上下學(xué)已經(jīng)普遍，人們對此看法各異，有些人認(rèn)為接送孩子上學(xué)安全，可以讓孩子有更多的休息時間，而且父母可以更好地和孩子溝通，而另一些人認(rèn)為這會造成交通堵塞(traffic jams),特別是高峰期(rush hours),而且這樣的會使孩子更多地依賴父母。請陳述這些觀點，并表明自己的看法。應(yīng)該用第三人稱，時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作前先根據(jù)給出的提綱，寫出有關(guān)的短語和固定表達(dá)備用。最后串聯(lián)起來。內(nèi)容要點包括：朋友的名字、年齡、外貌特征、人品和能力等。

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