書面表達(15分)

冬奧會中,速滑小將王濛冬奧會摘金 跪拜教練李琰的場面給我們留下了很深的印象。那么你是否也同樣的感受,畢業(yè)臨近之際,你想對你的老師說些什么,或者你想為你的老師做些什么來表達自己的心情和想法。請寫出來。(80詞左右,可以寫成書信格式)

 

 

 

 

Dear Miss Li:

First of all, I should thank you for your help. Three years ago, I was a little kid, I knew nothing about my study, my life and my teachers. I was unfamiliar with everything. With your help, I began to realize how to be a good student, how to study and how to achieve my dream. Thanks to your help, I thought that I have changed a lot. Now, I will leave you. It makes me sad. I ‘ll never forget you.

Miss Li, please believe in me, I will try my best to study hard in the future.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析:初三臨近畢業(yè)之際,學生們心里肯定有很多話想說,這篇作文就讓我們在這個情景下,寫一寫想對老師說的話。題目中沒有具體提到該寫什么,所以這篇作文是開放性的。通過分析我們可以知道,在這樣的臨別之際,學生對老師的感受應該是感激,感謝和祝福。三年來,老師無私的培育學生們成長,在學習、生活各方面幫助學生,這些內(nèi)容我們要用正確的英語表達出來,語言準確,合乎外語的表達方式。寫作時,要注意有條理,不要一會說這個,一會又說那個?梢允褂每偡挚傔@樣的結(jié)構(gòu),先對老師表示感謝,再細說為什么要感謝老師,最后寫一寫對老師的祝福。根據(jù)自己要表達是內(nèi)容,確定正確的時態(tài)。

【亮點說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文,在文章中作者對自己的老師說出了自己心里的話。首先作者用一句話表達了對老師的感激之情,F(xiàn)irst of all, I should thank you for your help,感謝老師的幫助。接著作者具體寫了自己這三年里,是如何在老師是關(guān)懷下成長的,這一部分主要使用了一般過去時態(tài),I knew nothing about my study, my life and my teachers. I was unfamiliar with everything. With your help, I began to realize how to be a good student, how to study and how to achieve my dream.,這幾個排比句的使用為文章增色不少。另外作者還使用了with one’s help、thanks to 等短語,也都非常準確。最后再次表達感謝,并下決心以后更加努力。整篇文章內(nèi)容完整,結(jié)構(gòu)合理,語言準確。

考點:話題作文。

 

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