書面表達(dá)（10分）

假如David是你的好朋友，請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，以“My Friend David”為題寫一篇短文。

注意：1. 要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。

2. 詞數(shù)80左右。

David

14歲，和家人住在泰興。

lifestyle

有一個(gè)健康的生活方式，兩餐之間從不吃甜食。

 

hobby

[經(jīng)常去購(gòu)物中心。認(rèn)為那是一個(gè)會(huì)見(jiàn)朋友和娛樂(lè)的好地方。

喜歡穿白色衣服。認(rèn)為白色和其他什么顏色都相配。

最喜歡春節(jié)，家人團(tuán)聚，享用美餐，非常幸福。

plan

想當(dāng)一名設(shè)計(jì)師（designer），現(xiàn)在正在努力學(xué)習(xí)，希望夢(mèng)想成真。

My Friend David

My friend David is 14 years old this year. _________________________________

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My dear friend---David

My dear friend David is 14 years old and lives in Taixing with his family. He has a healthy lifestyle,. For example,he never eats sweet food between two meals.

He often goes shopping in the shopping center because he thinks it is a good place to meet friends and have entertainments. White is his favourite colour, because he thinks that white goes with any other colour. His favourite festival is the Spring Festival because he can enjoy delicious food and get together with families and every feels happy.

He wants to be a designer and is working hard. He hopes his dream will come true.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們以My dearfriend --David為題寫一篇作文，即David的情況給大家做一介紹。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的寫作提綱，主要包括三部分的內(nèi)容。一是Davia生活情況；二是David的愛(ài)好和習(xí)慣；最后是夢(mèng)想等。提綱雖然已經(jīng)列好，寫作時(shí)，需注意語(yǔ)句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者從生活、愛(ài)好和夢(mèng)想三個(gè)方面，分成三段，講述了David生活情況。這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，think和hope的賓語(yǔ)從句以及不定式和恰如其分地使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)、將來(lái)時(shí)等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。

 

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