Question

書面表達(dá)(本題滿分20分)

請根據(jù)下表內(nèi)的提示內(nèi)容寫一篇英語短文介紹一位你的新同學(xué)Sam。說說他學(xué)習(xí)生活中的優(yōu)點以及存在的問題，并對他今后的學(xué)習(xí)生活提些建議。

個人情況	優(yōu)點	缺點
性格品質(zhì)及素養(yǎng)	自信……、 有耐心、 樂于助人、 ……	喜歡捉弄別人
團(tuán)結(jié)合作與交流	有團(tuán)隊合作精神	做與眾不同的事情
愛好	看電視，讀書，最喜歡的中國作家是莫言，喜歡綠色……	因為看電視太多，視力較差
愿望	在中國交很多的朋友，成為一名著名的作家
你的建議	1.空余時間里多和同學(xué)交談……

寫作要求：

1．要點齊全，省略號要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮至少一句話。

2．詞數(shù)90 左右。

3．條理清晰，語意連貫，字跡工整。

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Answer 1

This term we have a new classmates, his name is Sam. He is very confident. He thinks he can do things well and successfully. He is also very patient and ready to help others. He studies very hard. But he likes making fun of others. He likes to work with others but he usually does work differently with others.

He likes watching TV and reading books. He likes Mo Yan, a Chinese writer best. Blue is his favorite color. But his eye sight is very poor because he watches TV too much.

He hope to make many friends in China and be a famous writer in future.

I think he should talk more with his classmates in spare time and not watch TV too much.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，并且給出了具體要求，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點說明】這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。

考點：提示性作文