Question

書面表達(dá)（本題滿分15分）

我有個朋友叫李麗。請根據(jù)以下信息，寫一封70字左右的文章，介紹李麗及她的校園生活。

Name	Li Li	Age	12
Live in	Beijing	Looks	short and thin
Hobbies	Dancing, listening to music	Class	Class 2, Grade 7
School	Sunshine Middle School	Good at	Biology
Get up	6:30 a.m.	Get to school	7:50 a.m.
Classes	Have 6 classes a day	get home	5:30 p.m.

要求：

1. 語法正確，語句通順。

2. 信息全面，書寫正確。

I have a friend. Her name is Li Li.

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

I have a friend. Her name is Li Li. She is 12 years old. She lives in Beijing now. She is short and thin. She likes dancing and listening to music. She studies in Sunshine Middle School and she is in Class 2, Grade 7. She is good at biology. She gets up at 6:30am every morning. and gets to school at 7:50am. She has 6 classes a day. She gets home at 5:30pm.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們介紹自己的好朋友李麗和她的校園生活。題目中的表格中給出了李麗的相關(guān)信息，例如她的年齡、外貌、愛好、所在學(xué)校以及她的日常生活。我們需要用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。通過分析可知，這篇短文中我們介紹的是自己的好朋友，所以整篇短文都應(yīng)該使用第三人稱she來表達(dá)，并且應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，所以這里就需要注意句子中第三人稱單數(shù)形式的使用，注意動詞形式的變化。還要注意語句的表達(dá)要合乎英語的表達(dá)規(guī)范，語法正確。另外寫作時還需要注意使用好的句型和短語，使文章意思連貫，語句通順。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文，短文中作者按照題目的要求介紹了自己的好朋友李麗。首先作者寫的是李麗的年齡、外貌和愛好，She is 12 years old. She lives in Beijing now. She likes dancing and listening to music；這里作者使用了句型like doing sth.；接下來寫的是她在學(xué)校的情況，She studies in Sunshine Middle School and she is in Class 2, Grade 7. She is good at biology.最后寫了李麗的日常生活，She gets up at 6:30am every morning. and gets to school at 7:50am. She has 6 classes a day. She gets home at 5:30pm。整篇短文語法正確，使用了正確的人稱和時態(tài)，特別是注意了第三人稱單數(shù)的使用。并且盡可能多的使用了好的句型和連詞，使文意連貫。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。