Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（10分）

美國(guó)女孩Amy是你班上新來(lái)的同學(xué)，她想了解學(xué)校的課外活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格中的信息，寫(xiě)一篇短文告訴她有關(guān)情況。

課外活動(dòng)時(shí)間	每天下午3:30至4:50
戶外活動(dòng)	可以在操場(chǎng)打球（足球、籃球、排球、乒乓球）
室內(nèi)活動(dòng)	繪畫(huà)、象棋、唱歌、舞蹈、中國(guó)功夫（Chinese Kungfu）等
最受歡迎的活動(dòng)	中國(guó)功夫，因?yàn)樗�可以�?qiáng)身健體。老師是一位年輕的男老師，長(zhǎng)得很酷。
現(xiàn)在大多數(shù)同學(xué)還希望	加入DIY俱樂(lè)部，因?yàn)椤��?至少寫(xiě)兩點(diǎn))

要求：1．表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，但不要使用真實(shí)姓名和班名等：

2．詞數(shù)：60～80。開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Welcome to my class, Amy.1 am very glad to tell you about the after-class activities in our school．_____________________________________________________________________

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I hope you will enjoy as much as you can during your stay in our school.

 

Answer 1

Welcome to my class, Amy. I am very glad to tell you about the after-class activities in our school. Our after-class activities are from3:30p.m. to 4:50p.m. every day. You may play different ball games such as football, basketball,volleyball and table tennis in the school field. Besides that, there are some indoor activities like drawing, playing chess, singing, dancing, Chinese Kungfu and so on. Of all the activities, Chinese Kungfu is the most popular one. Because it helps us to become strong hope to join the DIY Club, because they can learn more about DIY and have fun making, repairing and decorating things themselves.

I hope you will enjoy as much as you can during your stay in our school.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z(yǔ)表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類(lèi)作文。