Question

書面表達(dá)。（滿分10分）

A: Let me tell you

B: 隨著歲月的流逝，我們漸漸長(zhǎng)大。同時(shí)也改變了很多，請(qǐng)以“How I’ve Changed !”為題寫一篇介紹自己變化的短文。

要求： 1﹑請(qǐng)從以上A﹑B兩個(gè)題目中任選一個(gè)進(jìn)行表達(dá)，若選A ， 請(qǐng)把題目補(bǔ)充完整再作答，列如：你可以寫“Let me tell you my dream”, “Let me tell you how to learn English ”, “Let me tell you I love you , Mom”等。

2﹑注意緊扣主題，意思連貫，語(yǔ)言通順，書寫規(guī)范。

3 ﹑不得使用真實(shí)人名和校名，如需使用，請(qǐng)用Mike ﹑Gina 等英文名如需校名，統(tǒng)一用Guangming Middle School.

4 ﹑詞數(shù)不少于60字。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

How I’ve Changed

My life has changed a lot in the past three years. I was fat and short when I came to the middle school. At that time I was interested in computer games and I spent most of time on it. My parents were worried about me. Now, I likesports and I often play football with my classmates after school. So I become taller and ber than before. I like reading, too. I usually go to the library to read some interesting books. Good habits help me to study better and keep healthier

【解析】

試題分析：作者介紹了自己在三年的時(shí)間中發(fā)生了改變，文中用到了過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在的對(duì)比。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，作者把自己三年的變化進(jìn)行了對(duì)比，用到了兩種時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，At that time I was interested in computer games and I spent most of time on it. Good habits help me to study better and keep healthier..這些句子給文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。