Question

作文(10分)

以“My best friend”為題寫一篇不少于70詞的短語，包括以下要點：

姓名	Tom	中文名	李思明	性別	男
國籍	美國	年級	7	班級	2
年齡	13	學校	Sunny Middle School
外貌	個子高，留短發(fā)，戴眼鏡
特長	英語，籃球。放學后，我們經(jīng)常在一起打籃球
優(yōu)點	善良，樂于助人(helpful)

My best friend

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Answer 1

My best friend

Tom is my best friend . His Chinese name is Li Siming . He comes from America . He is a boy of thirteen years

old . He studies in Sunny Middle School now . He is in Grade Seven . We are in the same class . He is tall . He has short hair . He wears glasses .He is good at English . He is helpful to others . He often helps us with our English .

He likes playing basketball . We often play together after school . He is kind ,too . When we are in trouble ,

he often tries his best to help us

【解析】

試題分析：這是篇人物介紹的短文，人物的相關(guān)信息都通過表格展示出來了。每個句子要含有表中的信息。不要生搬硬套，句意要連貫，有些內(nèi)容可以適當拓展。不能出現(xiàn)語法錯誤。

【亮點說明】內(nèi)容完整，句型靈活多樣，表達流暢。經(jīng)典句型較多，比如：When we are in trouble ,

he often tries his best to help us和He is a boy of thirteen years old . 為文章增添不少文采。

考點：提綱式作文