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請以Simon的名義向慈善機(jī)構(gòu)的主席王先生寫一封推薦Millie為慈善組織的一名成員的信。請至少列出推薦Millie的五個理由，并要有一定的事例說明。

提示：1.有許多個人特質(zhì)：自信、勤奮、好學(xué)，經(jīng)常贏得各種競賽。

2.樂于助人，常在學(xué)習(xí)上幫助我們。

3.為人善良，不自私，能注意每個細(xì)節(jié)。

4.聰明，總是能想到很多的好主意。但他從不炫耀

5．……（自擬一點(diǎn)）

信的開頭已給出

5th September

Dear Mr. Wang,

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______________________________________________

______________________________________________

______________________________________________

Yours sincerely

Simon

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

5th September

Dear Mr. Wang,

I am writing to recommend Millie as a member of the charity. We all like him because he has many personal qualities. He is confident, hard-working and helpful.He often wins all kinds of competitions. He is always ready to help others, and he usually helps us with studying. Also, he is so kind that he gets on well with all his classmates. He is never selfish. And he can pay attention to every detail.The most important thing is that he is clever and imaginative. He is creative enough to come up with new ideas. However, he never shows off. We think he has all the qualities to be a good member of the charity. We hope you can agree with us.

Yours sincerely

Simon

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，寫一封向主席王先生推薦Millie為慈善組織成員的信。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I am writing to......;We all like him because......; He is......;He can......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系.

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了寫推薦信的 目的，接下來介紹Millie的個人特質(zhì)，最后希望王先生能同意。此處用了write to.; a member of; all kinds of; be ready to;get on well with; come up with,

show off 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。