書面表達(dá)（共20分）

 

My hometowm

There used to be many factories in my hometown. The workers often put the waste into the rivers. So the rivers were very dirty and many fish died.

Luckily, our government realized the problem and took action. Many factories moved away. The air is fresh and the rivers are clean again. People can swim in the rivers. Now my hometown has turned into a modern town. There are many places of interest and a lot of tourists come to my hometown every year.

Now people are enjoying a comfortable life.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文進(jìn)行了較為全面的說(shuō)明，能用簡(jiǎn)短的詞匯表達(dá)出提綱的內(nèi)容，并且進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)?shù)奶幚�，�?zhǔn)確的添加自己的觀點(diǎn)，同時(shí)使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。

 

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