Question

師生關系是學校生活中的一個最基本的人際關系。有人認為應該同老師交朋友，建立良好的師生關系。這樣可以促進學生的學習，對教師的教學有幫助。也有人認為不應該與老師交朋友，師生之間應該是嚴肅的，應該保持距離。請你圍繞是否應該與老師交朋友這一話題展開思路談談你的感想.

要求：1. 80—100詞；2.不要逐句翻譯； 3.字跡工整，語言流暢，表達正確，邏輯清晰。

Make Friends with Teachers

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Make Friends with Teachers

Modern relationship between teachers and students is much better than that in the past, which is more relaxing and pleasant,Nowadays, getting along well with teachers is much valued than ever before. Making friends with teachers makes it easier for us to get along smoothly with our study at school。

However,some students disagree.They think it unnecessary to make friends with teachers.Strictness is a necessary. It not only forces us to do the right thing, but also helps us develop a good learning habit, which is of great importance during our whole life .

As far as I am concerned,I would turn to teachers whenever I had any trouble, which enables me to grow up healthily.Therefore,I think it worthwhile for us to make friends with teachers.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們以Make Friends with Teachers為題寫一篇作文，即與老師做朋友。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的寫作提綱，內容包括三部分，一是一部分人同意與老師做朋友，可以促進學生的學習，對教師的教學有幫助。二是有人認為不應該與老師交朋友，師生之間應該是嚴肅的，應該保持距離。三是要談談自己的想法，在此應該發(fā)揮自己的想象力，談談自己的觀點。提綱雖然已經列好，但是很多內容都需要我們自己去充實，讓它變得完整、合理，內容豐富，這就需要花費我們的想象力，以及我們平時積累的知識。另外，寫作時，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達流暢。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者從三個方面分三段Make Friends with Teachers，短文中需要作者自己補充的內容完成得也不錯。如：Modern relationship between teachers and students is much better than that in the past, which is more relaxing and pleasant.It not only forces us to do the right thing, but also helps us develop a good learning habit, which is of great importance during our whole life 等。這些內容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如not only.... but also ...;As far as I am concerned,They think it unnecessary to make friends with teachers.Strictness is a necessary. Modern relationship between teachers and students is much better than that in the past, which is more relaxing and pleasant等。

考點：提綱類作文。