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　　以　My Best Friend and I　為題寫一篇短文，比較你倆的特征，不少于６０詞．

要求：１.　我的好友名叫琳達(dá)；２.在某些方面，我們看上去一樣；在某些方面，我們看起來(lái)不同；３.我們都有黑眼睛，黑頭發(fā)；４.她比我高，比我文靜，很認(rèn)真；５我外向一點(diǎn)，而且比她風(fēng)趣；６都喜歡讀書

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Answer 1

【答案】

I have a good friend. Her name is Linda. In some ways we look the same. But in other ways we are different. We both have black eyes and black hair. She is taller and quieter than me. She is very careful. I’m a little more outgoing than her. I am also funnier than her. We both like reading. She is good at English. But I am good at Chinese.  We often help each other.

【解析】

試題分析；這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我和我的朋友。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My /Her name is……，be good at及do well in等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)自己的交友意愿。。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：此類作文考查的是學(xué)生基礎(chǔ)的寫作能力，主要是一些基礎(chǔ)句型的應(yīng)用。平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)中應(yīng)注意對(duì)于一些常見句型句式的記憶，聯(lián)系默寫此類句型。對(duì)于一些比較經(jīng)典的段落，有目的的進(jìn)行背誦，考試作為參照。這尤其對(duì)于敘述的邏輯問(wèn)題有很大的幫助。