書面表達 (共1小題 ; 滿分20分)

初中的學習生活即將結(jié)束了。請你以“How I change”為題,寫一篇短文,描述你這三年里前后的變化。寫作要點包括外貌,興趣愛好,行為習慣等方面。

寫作要求:

1.80詞左右(開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù))

2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)校名和人名,否則不計分

3. 所給寫作要點都必須要用上;緊扣主題,適當發(fā)揮。

How I change

My life has changed a lot in the past three years._____________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

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My life has changed a lot in the past two years. I was fat and short when I came to the middle school. At that time I was interested in computer games and I spent most of time on it. I often stayed up and got up late. My parents were worried about me.

With the teachers’ help, I like sports now and I often play football with my classmates after school. So I become taller and ber than before. I have a few close friends and we all like reading, too. So I usually go to the library to read some interesting books together with them. I go to bed and get up early now. My parents feel glad to see these. I’m sure I’ll be better and better.

【解析】

試題分析:這篇短文要求我們以how I change為題寫一篇作文,即我是怎樣變化的。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的主要內(nèi)容。一是外貌方面的改變。二是興趣愛好方面的改變。最后是行為習慣等方面的變化等。主要內(nèi)容雖然已經(jīng)列好,但是還需要我們自己去充實,讓它變得完整、合理,內(nèi)容豐富,這就需要花費我們的想象力,以及我們平時積累的知識。另外,寫作時,還需注意語句間的銜接,使文意連貫,表達流暢。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者從外貌,興趣愛好,行為習慣等三個方面,講述了自己這兩年來的變化,層次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己補充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯。如My parents were worried about me.等。這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要,意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型,如With the teachers’ help, I like sports now and I often play football with my classmates after school.等。

考點:提綱類作文

 

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