Question

請(qǐng)以Mid-Autumn Festival為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。要求：要點(diǎn)齊全，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，不少于70個(gè)單詞。內(nèi)容包括：
1. 中秋節(jié)是中國(guó)一個(gè)重要的（important）節(jié)日。所有的中國(guó)家庭慶祝它。
2. 總是在每年的九月或十月。每年這個(gè)時(shí)候天氣涼爽。
3. 所有家庭成員聚在一起，吃團(tuán)圓飯。喜歡吃月餅。有各種各樣的月餅。
4. 晚飯后賞月，并聽(tīng)嫦娥的故事。
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Answer 1

   
One possible version：
My Family's Mid-autumn Day
Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. All Chinese people usually celebrate it at home. It falls in September or in October every year. At this time, it is cool. On this day，people usually get together with their families and have a nice meal. The most popular food is moon cakes. There are all kinds of moon cakes. After that，people always watch the moon.  At this time, people listen to the story about Chang’e.  It is a day of pleasure and happiness.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹中秋節(jié)是人們的習(xí)俗。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Mid-Autumn Festival is ......；people usually get together ......；people listen to......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)人們?cè)谥星锕?jié)過(guò)的快樂(lè)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹中秋節(jié)的重要性，接下來(lái)介紹人們?cè)谥星锕?jié)的習(xí)俗，最后表達(dá)人們的快樂(lè)心情。此處用了At this time, get together，have a nice meal，all kinds of等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。