Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（10分）

假如你是無(wú)錫東湖塘中學(xué)的一名初三學(xué)生，你要寫(xiě)一封推薦信給班主任Mr. Wang，告訴他你想推薦Sandy做你們班的班長(zhǎng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列信息，寫(xiě)完這封信。

姓 名	Sandy
性格	聰明：能將所有的事情做好。 勤奮：總為班級(jí)做額外的工作。 有條理(organized)：從不忘記自己需要做的事。 樂(lè)于助人：樂(lè)意時(shí)刻幫助別人。
愛(ài)好	喜愛(ài)閱讀：因?yàn)榭梢詮臅?shū)中學(xué)到許多。 喜愛(ài)藍(lán)色：因?yàn)樗{(lán)色……；當(dāng)別人生氣或激動(dòng)時(shí)，常能讓他們平靜下來(lái)。

注意： 1．詞數(shù)90左右。 2．根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮1到2句，注意句意連貫。

Dear Mr. Wang,

I’m writing to recommend Sandy to be our monitor. I think she has many strong qualities for this position.

Sandy is _________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________

I hope that you can agree with me.

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Wang,

I’m writing to recommend Sandy to be our monitor. I think she has many strong qualities for this position.

Sandy is clever. She can do all the things well. She is hard-working, and always does extra work for class. Sandy is organized. She never forgets the things she needs to do. She is helpful and ready to help others any time. Sandy likes reading because she can learn a lot from books. She loves blue. Blue is a calm colour. It represents peace. When others are angry or excited, she can often make them calm down.

I hope that you can agree with me.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第三人稱(chēng)，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: be ready to準(zhǔn)備；calm down平靜下來(lái)。Sandy likes reading because she can learn a lot from books.桑迪喜愛(ài)閱讀，因?yàn)榭梢詮臅?shū)中學(xué)到許多。When others are angry or excited, she can often make them calm down. 當(dāng)別人生氣或激動(dòng)時(shí)，常能讓他們平靜下來(lái)。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。